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FALLOUTGOD
Wandering Hero
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posted February 17, 2003 18:21      Profile for FALLOUTGOD   Email FALLOUTGOD   Send New Private Message     Edit/Delete Post  Reply With Quote    UIN: 161401573   
there is something deep inside
deeper than the early fog
nothing smiles above the darkness
as I enter what I see
this is all that I have found
this is all that there will be
now it's something one can see
if you find it beneath the tree
in the darkness of it's shadow
lies a diffrent kind of secret
better than the one I found
luaghing in between the funny looks
turning over in the ravings of the book
uncontrolable it's luaghter
raging wisdom does unfold
holding something left untold
as the leaves above the sarrow
as the wings of the dismay
where the little silly rabbits
jump about the endless barrows
where the fuzzy little bunnys
eat the carrots in the field
all the trees around the forest
all the things within this wood
everlasting has it stood
ever luaghing is it still
deep inside the forests darkness
under shadows of it's self
lying there beneath our tree
deep beneath the branches
hanging low to touch the ground
hidden deep within the leaves
blind as love and cold as steel
ever luaghing as if nothing
all the secrets does it keep

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xcuse me while i kill my self
blow my brain across the wall
fuck you all, how do you do
fuck me? fuck you too
and now i end this all

xcuse me while...... i kill my seeeeeeeeeeeeeelf


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Scotty the Great
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posted February 18, 2003 15:57      Profile for Scotty the Great   Author's Homepage   Email Scotty the Great   Send New Private Message     Edit/Delete Post  Reply With Quote    UIN: 83373429
Well, this peom was pretty good, but I thought it lacked a little something. It just doesn't seem to measure up to the other two in my opinion.

Still good, though. [Cool]


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FALLOUTGOD
Wandering Hero
Member # 94

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posted February 18, 2003 16:10      Profile for FALLOUTGOD   Email FALLOUTGOD   Send New Private Message     Edit/Delete Post  Reply With Quote    UIN: 161401573   
Thanks

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xcuse me while i kill my self
blow my brain across the wall
fuck you all, how do you do
fuck me? fuck you too
and now i end this all

xcuse me while...... i kill my seeeeeeeeeeeeeelf


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