posted February 17, 2003 18:21
 
 
there is something deep inside deeper than the early fog nothing smiles above the darkness as I enter what I see this is all that I have found this is all that there will be now it's something one can see if you find it beneath the tree in the darkness of it's shadow lies a diffrent kind of secret better than the one I found luaghing in between the funny looks turning over in the ravings of the book uncontrolable it's luaghter raging wisdom does unfold holding something left untold as the leaves above the sarrow as the wings of the dismay where the little silly rabbits jump about the endless barrows where the fuzzy little bunnys eat the carrots in the field all the trees around the forest all the things within this wood everlasting has it stood ever luaghing is it still deep inside the forests darkness under shadows of it's self lying there beneath our tree deep beneath the branches hanging low to touch the ground hidden deep within the leaves blind as love and cold as steel ever luaghing as if nothing all the secrets does it keep
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xcuse me while i kill my self blow my brain across the wall fuck you all, how do you do fuck me? fuck you too and now i end this all
posted February 18, 2003 15:57
 
Well, this peom was pretty good, but I thought it lacked a little something. It just doesn't seem to measure up to the other two in my opinion.