posted December 12, 2003 15:21
 
Tony woke up to the sound of Amber's voice. "What happened to him? Why am I not allowed to see him? He scared me back there and you said he was stable now... right?" The doctor spoke with a certian amount of panic in his voice. "I don't know how to explain this... but tony died... only he didn't... He was dead for 3 full minuits... then he woke up from the eternal sleep... it was not possable... any human would be dead... We need to study this disease... or we may get infected... god forbid..." Tony got up. He casually snapped his jaw like people crack their knuckles. He cracked his back and neck. Finally his knuckles... then he nocticed something... This was not something about his surroundings, but about him. His muscles were standing out much more than they ever had before... it was as if this disease had melted all the fat off of his body and formed muscle from it. He was stronger than ever... He ran is tounge over his teeth and yelled hoarsly in horror of what he realized... TBE Yeah, never got plugged into word... next week 2 parts for sure guys, I have 3/4 of a part done sorry that it was such a short part... Ill put one up monday to redeem it...
[ December 12, 2003: Message edited by: Danoth Dragon God ]
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posted December 13, 2003 09:40
 
ok ok give him a break. If u want good parts he needs time,otherwise hell post long crappy parts.. looking good danoth..
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